the crooked clock & the cracks beneath it; that detail is *chef's kiss. Like, the whole house is performing normalcy & falling apart at the same time and you told us that in one image. Plus, ending on "I turn the knob" without resolving it is the braver choice. I feel like it would've been easy to give the reader certainty either way & you didn't. I love it.
the crooked clock & the cracks beneath it; that detail is *chef's kiss. Like, the whole house is performing normalcy & falling apart at the same time and you told us that in one image. Plus, ending on "I turn the knob" without resolving it is the braver choice. I feel like it would've been easy to give the reader certainty either way & you didn't. I love it.
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It was well worth my time to read ♡
A very aggressive opening. A real attention grabber. A short read. Captivating.
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